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Rooftop Flying in Ahmedebad

—after the photo essay by Tal Streeter


They call it kite fever, kite madness, gangs of kite looting children

hoarding bright acid kites, darting through rows of kite kiosks,

until the kite wars of the Festival of Kites begin.  One string must cut

another, the Manjha, the fighting string, fortified with a paste of spices, rice,

crushed glass and gems.   I felt I was being born again as a bird, says a boy

of his virgin festival who ever after seeks that primal pull.

Bird or warrior?   Bushad late to his wedding for lingering on the roof

flying kites, the sandalwood reel humming, his ring finger

clacking against the tug of flight.   And what of our British photographer,

trekking the roiling Punjab to capture the eyes of God?

One of the self-styled road trippers, track bashers… popping his head

out the bus window to soak in the gorgeous view,

let him rain on us the hands of kite makers, parsimonious

vendors of kites, multicolored rice paste dyed and infused,

mythic kite creatures, kites hung with pennants and years ago—

so the story goes—a single gold wafer from the Mughul Nawab

that would fall into the arms of the one lucky man

in a crowd of thousands who could now support his family for a year.

Thus blessings waft down from a heaven full of dancing

symbols and backlit bamboo bones standing out in sunlight.

The rooftop bristles with men, but I, hidden woman,

below the roof of the world—I will scribble secret kites,

contraband messages, the kind prisoners smuggle to those

beyond the bars.   Love me when I least deserve it,

says my love, because that is when I need it most,

so I will not be a predatory kite, talons shadowing

the scouring light.  I will say that in this grip of love I will be the best

prisoner I can be.  Rapt by the wind-tossed chaos

of tug and go, clasp and ignore, I will expect no Aeolian hum

to play across my lines.  I will make this a proper shield kite and keep my beloved

kiting always–kiting, yes, but never off, unlike my father’s lifelong friend

on parasail whose heart gave out kiting swells of air.

Not tako kichi, kite crazy, let me stay small and humble

like a vendor who bundles kites in old papers tied with scraps of string.



  1. Greg Roll on

    The imagery is nearly chaotic and I suppose it is supposed to be. How else to assimilate the scene. But there hidden behind the commotion, is a gem of the heart.

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